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Friday, October 22, 2021

The Deep dark hole

 Hey readers throughout the week i have bee working on our descriptive writing i hope you enjoy!

The Deep Dark Hole

P1


“Hey guys, welcome to my youtube channel! Today i will attempt to stay for 24 hours at the haunted library make sure you like and subscribe for my good luck”

“So it's been about 3 hours. I've read some books. Let's go return them!”

“OH NO! My camera!”.

She jumped down furiously.

“Got it!”

She kept falling and falling as her hair suddenly frizzed.

Poof! She ended up landing.

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Weirdly she was not hurt. 

As she looked around.

She landed up on a HUMONGUS!!!

CAT…???!!!!

“OH NO!”

“I left my Phone up there!”

“What am I gonna do now???”

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She yelled furiously.

although her voice did not come out,Yet A Quivering squeaky voice did.

Some boy heard The voice and lowered a rope

“IM Safe Yay thank you so much!!!”

“Ok guys, so i made 24 hours!!!!”


2 comments:

  1. Hi Lathan Bilal here I really your blogpost its super interesting and it looks terrifying anyways I'm super excited for camp I hope you are!

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